🔸Author: MysMiracle
🔸Title: SKEPTICAL LOVE
🔹Editors' Feedback:
The blurb begins with an introduction to the challenges of being famous and the need to hide personal information, and then shows the conflict between the main character and Vincent through dialogue, and the main character's internal struggle with their relationship and past experiences, arousing the reader's curiosity and evoking an emotional response from them.
However, the blurb contains no basic information about the main characters and provides no specific details about the main events or plot developments, leaving the reader unsure of what to expect from the story. The author could improve this blurb from more specific character introductions and plot details to better engage the reader.
🔸Author: LILMEAW
🔹Editors' Feedback:
The blurb fits well with the theme of “Enemy to Lover” in YA Fiction. The introduction to Arya gives the reader an immediate sense of her personality and interests, and how she grows and changes throughout the story. It sets up the conflict between Arya and Leo as rival families, hinting at the potential consequences of their relationship, which creates a sense of tension. And the mention of these interactions between Arya and Leo, with their stolen glances and secret meetings, will appeal to readers who enjoy romance and drama.
However, the blurb is a bit general and introduces less about Leo, which could be improved by providing more specific details and more information about Leo.